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EDIT May 3rd, 2009: Added a background, changed the logo a bit and cleaned it up~ Also, I wanted to test the critique setting or whatever it's called XDDDD I hope this is good enough >_>;;
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I don't know where to begin.

Ok, first of all, the first chapter's not done yet. This is just for fun. XDDDD

I...I should be working on my commissions. I know, I know.
Honey made me do this. :C As soon as I showed her the Shonen Jump template, she went "OMG YOU TOTALLY HAVE TO MAKE A COVER FOR NANAIRO RIGHT NOW YOU CAN FINISH THOSE COMMISSIONS LATER :iconffffplz:"...and I'm in a Nanairo mood now, so here it is! A fake manga cover for the first volume of Nanairo. :'3

If you were wondering, no. I didn't get Copic markers. It's a Copic marker textured brush you can download here~ :3

I did my best to make it look like the traditional manga illustrations, but I failed at the lineart. :C Bah. I don't care. I loved how the coloring came out. So traditionally messy. :'D


OH YEAH AND HERE'S A NEW LOGO. O: I dunno...I kinda like it. I might keep it. :'3


uhhh don't know what else to say. I'm freezing -A-;; -shiver-

Enjoy? <3



Nanairo (c) ~Blackgatomon and me (ahaha <333)

Critiques


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Vision: I love the logo and the background. THey match very nicely. I enjoy the character as well. He's very well developed and his clothing and pose make the cover better.
I also like the small Volume One logo design at the bottom. It fits this character and cover.

Originality: This looks to be very orginial, and not copied from someone else's work. The character is different from any manga characters I've seen. The cover has a different style than other covers as well. Like the title is at the top, and the pose and background are unique. Great job.

Technique: I'm assuming/guessing you made this in photoshop. So based on that, I love the special brush that makes it look as if you used Copic markers. That's really cool. I also love how the logo is set up. The rainbow colors and designs for each letter. I like how each seem to have a different 'element' in th design (fire, water, ect.).

Impact: Overall I'd say that this cover seems flawless. Obviously nothing is perfect, but I can't find anything to nag or nit-pick about. So overall, it's an amazing cover. The character looks different and unique, the title and layout of the page is wonderful. And the background just makes everything better.

Wonderful job. Can't wait to see more Nanariofrom you in the future . (:
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:iconnishi06:
lol I was about to ask if that was copics ><!! really awesome! I looooooooooove his hair!!

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i love the simplicty to it, and his pose <3
very nice coloring ;3


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Oh shit yeah!!!

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WANT!

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I like it a lot. So realistic! And you should keep the Logo, its unique :>

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:iconookamirox:
omg i must download!!!
thats way cool (download.download.download.)

great picture too!!! and awsome logo ;D
it totally looks traditionally done!!! and good job on teh template!

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I thought It's gonna begin finally ...

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So cool. :wow: Hope your story becomes a real manga!!

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Wow, it really does look like an official manga volume cover page.

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Crazy cool!
Also, i like the banner idea with the powers and stuff, but it;s a bit busy. idk. still awesome.

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